I should be asleep but I'm not so I decided to post this.
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Quezacotl
woohoo
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It's way too late
woohoo- The Real Pooper
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Join date : 2012-01-30
Age : 31
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- Post n°1
It's way too late
Quezacotl- Admin
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Join date : 2011-03-17
- Post n°2
Re: It's way too late
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Beautiful story man. I was connected to the main character immediately, and then it made me shed manly tears - the simple diction of this piece is wonderous! The motivation to write this post must have been terrible for you, but...good lord, I need to go cry now, this was so depressing! I will read this story over, and over again, until the day I die.
Keep writing man, I'm expecting a lot from ye.
Best Thread Ever.
Beautiful story man. I was connected to the main character immediately, and then it made me shed manly tears - the simple diction of this piece is wonderous! The motivation to write this post must have been terrible for you, but...good lord, I need to go cry now, this was so depressing! I will read this story over, and over again, until the day I die.
Keep writing man, I'm expecting a lot from ye.
Best Thread Ever.
Pochitos- Global Moderator
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- Post n°3
Re: It's way too late
I thought the plot was convoluted, though, and several plot holes were made evident by the lack of good dialogue.
Newlemming- Total Noob
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- Post n°4
Re: It's way too late
I don't understand why the man had the gun in his breast pocket though, it wasn't there when he left the police station, so where did it come from?
Other than that, 5 stars. Would definitely read again.
Other than that, 5 stars. Would definitely read again.
woohoo- The Real Pooper
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- Post n°5
Re: It's way too late
Did you notice the subtle reference near the end?
Pochitos- Global Moderator
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- Post n°6
Re: It's way too late
Yeah, but his second album is obviously superior.
I like your allusions to porn videos, though.
I like your allusions to porn videos, though.
Soul- Admin
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Re: It's way too late
wat is every1 tlkin abot???? theres no story thers liek one sentenc
ironic gay ninja- :cat:
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- Post n°8
Re: It's way too late
guys, i hate to be "that guy" but i think soul is right here. now if theres a joke goingo nhere that i might have missed, feel free to take it up with me in PMs but otherwise im going to have to lock this "troll" thread. my condolences to the op
Newlemming- Total Noob
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Re: It's way too late
No one understands the beauty of woohoo's brilliance.
Not even with the part about the Mexican family moving in with the impoverished Irish folks trying to evade the insane fish monger who's been following them for months.
Not even with the part about the Mexican family moving in with the impoverished Irish folks trying to evade the insane fish monger who's been following them for months.
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