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    It's way too late

    Post by woohoo on Mon Feb 06, 2012 12:52 am

    I should be asleep but I'm not so I decided to post this.

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    Re: It's way too late

    Post by Quezacotl on Mon Feb 06, 2012 8:48 am

    ...
    Beautiful story man. I was connected to the main character immediately, and then it made me shed manly tears - the simple diction of this piece is wonderous! The motivation to write this post must have been terrible for you, but...good lord, I need to go cry now, this was so depressing! I will read this story over, and over again, until the day I die.

    Keep writing man, I'm expecting a lot from ye.
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    Re: It's way too late

    Post by Pochitos on Mon Feb 06, 2012 9:11 am

    I thought the plot was convoluted, though, and several plot holes were made evident by the lack of good dialogue.
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    Post by Newlemming on Mon Feb 06, 2012 3:55 pm

    I don't understand why the man had the gun in his breast pocket though, it wasn't there when he left the police station, so where did it come from?

    Other than that, 5 stars. Would definitely read again.

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    Re: It's way too late

    Post by woohoo on Mon Feb 06, 2012 6:51 pm

    Did you notice the subtle reference near the end?

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    Re: It's way too late

    Post by Pochitos on Mon Feb 06, 2012 8:50 pm

    Yeah, but his second album is obviously superior.

    I like your allusions to porn videos, though.
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    Re: It's way too late

    Post by Soul on Tue Feb 07, 2012 7:35 am

    wat is every1 tlkin abot???? theres no story thers liek one sentenc

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    Post by ironic gay ninja on Tue Feb 07, 2012 6:55 pm

    guys, i hate to be "that guy" but i think soul is right here. now if theres a joke goingo nhere that i might have missed, feel free to take it up with me in PMs but otherwise im going to have to lock this "troll" thread. my condolences to the op
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    Post by Newlemming on Thu Feb 09, 2012 6:02 pm

    No one understands the beauty of woohoo's brilliance.

    Not even with the part about the Mexican family moving in with the impoverished Irish folks trying to evade the insane fish monger who's been following them for months.

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